Classmate Profile

Last week I did my interview with Skylar Jones and I wrote my profile story on her over the weekend. On Wednesday of this week I got my paper back and I realized that I need to put more color in my story. However, that is the problem that I ran into when interviewing her. I chose to write about her internship over the summer and I am having difficulty with adding color and depth to the story. So I have my story back and I am going to try and do corrections and turn in back in on Monday. Since this was the first assignment of they year I am hoping that the writing will get easier and my stories will not be boring and I can find the color in the story quick.